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Even though it was only 5:30 pm, it looked like midnight.
The sky was very dark with clouds.
It was raining so hard it flooded the streets.
She ran outside not even stopping to shut the door.
Her tears fell as hard as the rain.
They mixed in a puddle at her feet.
She ran as fast as she could down the street.
She was so exhausted and soked by the rain that she fell on their graves.
You see it was a year ago today.
Her parents had been in the air for a few hours.  
It was raining hard when they landed.
The pilot could not see the runway.
The crash and fire left no survivors.
The funeral it rained.  
Always rain.
The woman leaves the cemetery after telling her parents she loves them.
She went home and watched the weather.
MORE RAIN.

:rose: Copy written to Lynette Petrie
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Written by a one word inspiration from my future daughter in law.

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:iconelliealart:
Wonderfull...

The climate...

Oh I'm just speechless, you've done great job! :clap:

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Stroke my hair and give me one cookie, plase.
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:love::hug::heart::rose: thank you.

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:iconelliealart:
You're welcome, piece of fantastic thing!

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Stroke my hair and give me one cookie, plase.
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I really am great full for the support. :)

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Life is like a rose,Pretty but has biting thorns. My poetry is my original work. Please do not change it.

The love of my life is also my photographer ~foxtalker
I give all clubs I have joined permission to repost this. Giving Me credit
:iconelliealart:
:highfive:

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:lmao:
Stroke my hair and give me one cookie, plase.
:lmao:
:iconlmtcloud:
:love::hug::heart::rose:

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Life is like a rose,Pretty but has biting thorns. My poetry is my original work. Please do not change it.

The love of my life is also my photographer ~foxtalker
I give all clubs I have joined permission to repost this. Giving Me credit
:iconfourleafedrover:
This is so moving! I love it.

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Thank you.

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Life is like a rose,Pretty but has biting thorns. My poetry is my original work. Please do not change it.

The love of my life is also my photographer ~foxtalker
I give all clubs I have joined permission to repost this. Giving Me credit
:icondreammaker08:
Wow... I love how the rain connects the events in her life... The idea is great ^_^

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